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硕士论文致谢写作技巧及常见问题

2024/3/29 9:52:38  阅读:19 发布者:

去年黄国平博士的致谢之所以爆红网络,是因为具有很强的感染力,引起了广大网友的共鸣,打动了读者的心。想必大家也想写出具有自己特色甚至能打动人的致谢,为自己的论文加分。但是事实上,很多硕士论文致谢存在着不少问题。那么,我们该如何规避这些问题,书写一份独一无二的学位论文致谢?

致谢是一种态度

硕士论文致谢会放在哪里?国外学位论文的致谢,处在论文封面和目录之间,也就是说,如果去掉封面,首先看到的就是致谢。国外一些导师会修改学生的致谢,避免出现不妥。

相反,看到国内学位论文的致谢,则是放在参考文献之后。也就是说读者将从标题到参考文献全文看完,接着往下看才能看到致谢。导致致谢看上去是一种补充材料。

不知道致谢顺序的差异是否反映了大家对致谢重要性的不同理解。一些人看重致谢,因为致谢是一种态度。所以不恰当的致谢不仅会影响学生本人,也会影响导师和被致谢对象的形象。

学位论文常见的问题

随意书写的致谢,可能存在如下问题:

问题一:态度的抄袭

将他人的致谢拷入自己的学位论文中,仅替换姓名等词来当作自己的致谢。很多人认为这是正常做法,但事实上这属于态度级别的抄袭。

问题二:对他人进行不合适的评价

在致谢中有存在对导师等人的学术水平和为人进行评价的现象。在有些人看来,这种评价不合适。会认为这是把自己放在了能对导师学术水平进行评价的高度。

问题三:过度致谢

过度是指夸大其词或无关致谢。在日常生活中,过度容易被误解为讽刺。

问题四:泄露隐私

被致谢的对象都有自己的隐私(包括身份隐私和行为隐私),这些事情发生在你我之间很正常,但写给别人看不合适。

问题五:遗漏

一般不会遗忘致谢导师以及身边一些帮助过自己的人。但是,大多数论文的最终版没有致谢那些给自己提供过有效建议的论文评阅人、答辩委员成员以及外部专家。

问题六:致谢不规范

以博士学位论文为例,博士学位论文强调独立工作的能力。然而许多学生在致谢中,强调感谢导师悉心指导悉心指导会让人误解为事事都需要导师帮忙。

如何写一份独一无二的致谢

写出独一无二的致谢,才能让人感觉到致谢是发自内心的。那么如何写出独一无二的致谢呢?下面是五条建议仅供参考。

起稿前阅读至少十份致谢

阅读别人的致谢后,再来书写或者修改自己的致谢。本文末尾的附录A是一份学术型致谢,附录B则是一份情感型致谢,可以酌情参考。

确定致谢的逻辑顺序

标准的致谢按顺序包含五段内容,第一段是对导师致谢,第二段是对论文评阅人致谢,第三段是对答辩委员会主席和提出问题需求的企业负责人致谢,第四段是对工作过程中提供过数据和建设性建议的同行专家致谢,第五段是对帮助过自己的实验室人员和学校管理服务人员致谢。附录A的例子即为这种顺序。附录B则以个人为先。

将致谢先给导师看

致谢写好后,主动交给导师提建议。如果认为有不妥,可以按建议修改。

在语言风格上琢磨

花数天时间去斟酌致谢中合适的词汇,形成属于自己的独特语言。尽量使用通俗易懂的语句,少用难以理解和难以辨认的古词语。

多次添加致谢对象

预答辩前的草稿需要有致谢初稿。预答辩后加上预答辩中帮助过自己的专家。论文送审后加上值得感谢的论文评阅人。答辩后添加值得感谢的答辩委员会成员。

致谢范文

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附录B 致谢样板2(情感型)

Acknowledgements

I would like to first extend my gratitude to my family for all of the love and support they have given me throughout this journey. My children, Hailey and Liam, have and willalways be my greatest accomplishments but they are also the reason why I have pushed myself so hard to achieve my dreams. There is no limits to what you can accomplish as long as you stay trueto yourself and work hard for what you want. I am so proud to be their mother and know that they both have the brightest of futures in front of them.

To my husband, Phillip, who has supported me and been my rock when things got tough and late nights and lack of housekeeping became the norm. You gave me the strength, and the help that Ineeded to push through those times and scale the walls that often blocked me from finishing. I cannot tell you how grateful I am to be able to share this life with you and see what the world hasin store for us next.

To my parents and my aunt who always reminded me how proud they are of me. Especially my mother who during late night conversations would let meknow that I am strong and can do anything I set my mind to. I know grandma and grandpa are also by myside in spirit cheering me on and standing proud. I just wish they were here to see this accomplishment in person. I love all of you so much and can’t express how much I appreciate your support and patience.

Dr. Alan Levine, Dr. Lia Richards-Palmiter, and Dr. Amy Paciej-Woodruff. You have all been the most amazing support system and mentors and I could not have asked for a better dissertation committee. Dr.Levine, you were a constant cheerleader, a mentor, a motivator, and you continually challenged me to consider other aspects of my dissertation that overall made mea better researcher. I am forever grateful for your guidance and support. Dr. Richards-Palmiter, you have been a mentor to me for a great deallonger than this portion of my education. You have made me strive to seek out my dreams and find my passion. You are also a true friend and confidant. I am truly thankful to have you in my life and as a key member to help me achieve this degree. Dr. Paciej-Woodruff, I have always admired you and felt honored to have you as a member of my committee. Your mentorship and amazing advice truly madea big impact in achieving this dream and for that I am forever grateful.

I also want to thank my amazing coworkers who have given me the strength and support that I needed to accomplish thisgreat feat. Antonia, Bev, Michelle, Lia, and Meghan, you are the dearest of friends and the best coworkers a girl couldask for! Being able to work on a daily basis with such strong, intelligent, compassionate, and downright amazing women is an honor and I know I am a better person because you are all in my life.

Finally, to my cohort of amazing doctoral students who have trudge along with me throughout the years, especially Meg, Brooke, Sr. Kevin, and Kim. You are such amazing women and I am honored to havegone on this journey with you. You allhave made this experience one I will never forget. Not only have you been great friends and supporters but you have also shared your lives and experiences with me that I will forever embrace now as a part of the person I have become. From the late night texts to the panic we faced during this crazy pandemic, I am so thankful to have you all in my lives!

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