今天小帕给大家分享的是医学 SCI 论文写作常用句式——结果部分以及引言部分。
对一篇医学 SCI 论文来说,除了创新性和意义,最重要的就是展现论文的结果了。而针对不同的统计方法,结果描述也有所不同。如果您还只停留在一种句式,那样不仅会使文章显得死板,还会显得我们的英语非常匮乏。这里跟大家总结一下针对不同医学统计方法如何生动的描述结果。
结果部分
首先,对于显著性差异分析
1)如果差异显著,可以这样描述:
a,...is higher/lower/increase/decrease...in/by/withor after the administration of A than/compared with B;
b,Significantlyincreased/decreased...was observed in A compared with B。
c,significant differencesin...were observed/witnessed between A and B;
d,Enhanced/Decreased...inresponse to A/B was observed...;
e,A showedsignificant/better effect on ...than/compared with B;
f, Asignificantly decreased/increase/improve ...。
2)如果差异有趋势,可以这样描述:
a, A similartrend was observed in...;
b, A compared toC additionally trended to...;
c, ...tend to...in Acompared with B;
d, A tendencytowards higher/lower...was seen in...。
3)如果差异不显著或结果类似,可以这样描述:
a, No impact ofA/B/(A and B) on...was demonstrated in the presented experiment;
b, No effect on...occurredwith or after the administration of A/B/(A and B);
c, No differencein...was observed/witnessed between A and B;
d, There was nodifference in...;
e, ...in A and Bdid not differ;
f, ...was notsignificantly altered by ...-treatment...;
g, ...was similarin all (between) groups and ranged from ...to...。
4)如果两因素之间存在相互关系,比如干预和时间效应,可以这样描述:
a, A treatment ×period interaction/An interaction of treatment × week was observed for...as... (描述指标随时间变化);
b, There was an interactionof treatment × time for...。
另外,在描述结果时,可以尽量将两个相关的结果写在一句话中,用关联词链接,既可以使上下文衔接紧密,又可避免流水账式写法。如:
a,...in A and Bdid not differ, but ... tended to be higher/lower with/in A/B;
b,...remained at arelatively low level, although a trend was observed for the increase/decreasein A/B incomparison with B/A;
c,A/B were not foundto affect/have no effect on..., but tendency to...was observed in B/A;
d,Despite/Inspite of no effect on..., A/B significantly in creased/improved...;
e,Similartendencies, albeit not confirmed statistically/although not statisticallysignificant, were observed in the remaining groups in which patients were...;
f,A negativeeffect of...on...and a positive effect on...were observed。
第二,在描述相关性分析时,可以用
a, ...is verynegative significant correlated with ...;
b, There is asignificant negative correlation between...and...;
c, Rises in...paralleledincrease in...;
d, ...revealed asignificant correlation with...;
e, There was aninteraction between...and...。
第三,对生存分析的结果描述
a, Survival curvesaccording to Kaplan-Meier showed: 1. Survival at...years is...%, with 95% CIbetween...
and... ; 2. Survival estimate is...% at ... years;
b, Theoverall...-, ...- and ...-year survival rates of...were...%, ...% and...%, respectively;
c,The overallsurvival rates of...were calculated by the Kaplan-Meier, with...%, ...% and...% at..., ...and...years, respectively;
d,The survivorshipanalysis (Kaplan-Meier) showed a...% survival of...after...years.
第四,针对诊断方法的灵敏度分析
a,ROC analysis of .....determined that the cut-off valueof...yielded a sensitivity of...%, specificity of ...%,... of ...%, and...of...%;
b,A cut-off value of...resulted in a sensitivity,specificity, ...and...of...%,...%,...% and...%, respectively。
引言部分
引言部分其中一个重要功能就是说明本文的重要性,阐述本文的创新性及意义。我们可以用 However 等转折关联词来引导前人研究的不足,提出一种新方法或新方向。
如:However, little information/attention/work/data/research...(or few studies/investigations/researchers/attempts...) (or no/none of these studies) has (have) been done on/focused on/attempted to/conducted/investigated/studied (with respect to)...。
Previous research/studies/records has/have failed toconsider/ignored/misinterpreted/neglected to/overestimated/underestimated/misleaded....Thus, these previous results are inconclisive/misleading/unsatisfactory/questionable/controversial.
Their studies may be more reasonable if they had...consideredthis situation.
Their results could be better convinced if they...
Their conclusion may remain some uncertainties。
当研究方法和方向与前人一样时,可通过以下方式强调自己工作:
However, data is still scarce/rare/less accurate, we needto/aim to/have to provide more documents/data/records/studies/increase thedataset. Further studies are still necessary/essential...。
In the current study we tested the hypothesis that a policy of active management of nulliparous labour
would: 1. reduce the rate of caesarean section, 2. reduce the rate of prolonged labour; 3. not influence
maternal satisfaction with the birth experience。
This study aim to/This paper reports on/This paper provides results/This paperextends the method/This
paper focus on...;
The purpose of this paper is to...;
Furthermore/Moreover/In addition, we will also discuss...。
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