审稿意见：结果部分数据展示的方式

在结果部分，数据展示的方式需要需要和文字描述相一致。

下面给大家展示之前遇到的一个审稿意见

Comment 1

The way they present the results can be confusing. I'll present an example:

Page 8, lines 11-14: NT-proBNP, which one is A group and which one is the B group. Glucose, which one is A group and which one is the B group. Cholesterol, same question.

By looking at the table, one can realize which group they refer to, but please, for consistency, present the same order of results for each category, otherwise is difficult to follow, and our readers shouldn't have to put extra effort on reading the results

比如： a 比b 的NT-proBNP更高（a的NT-proBNP vs. b的NT-proBNP, P=xxx）,不能写成

a 比b 的NT-proBNP更高（b的NT-proBNP vs. a的NT-proBNP, P=xxx）

此外，在括号内进一步明确是哪两个的对比更好

比如，a 比b 的NT-proBNP更高（a vs. b :a的NT-proBNP vs. b的NT-proBNP, P=xxx）

下面给大家展示一下这个问题的回复

Response: Thank you for your constructive comment. I completely agree with your suggestion to present the same order of results for each category to improve consistency and make it easier for readers to follow. We presented the results in a consistent order for each category (Page 8, Line 12-18; Page 9, Line 5-14; Page 11, Line 11-13). For example,具体改正的例子

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