1 如何设置故事开端
一、巧用副词副词有修饰性副词和连接性副词(句子副词)两类，可用于修饰动词、形容词、句子等。修饰性副词可表示程度、方式等，使所要表达的情感更加鲜明、强烈，使句子更具表现力和感染力。连接性副词的运用，能使句间的衔接更紧密，逻辑更清晰，所表达的含义简洁明了。
（一）修饰性副词
Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass. 他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。
Joyfully, he skipped up the street. 他很高兴地跳过了街道。
【这里的carefully和joyfully把后面两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。】
典例赏析
1.一到达Scout家, 那个年老的女人就急切地按门铃。
Arriving at Scout's home, the old woman eagerly rang the doorbell.
2.他真诚地说:“我母亲教导我，施以爱心，不图回报。”
“My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness,”he said sincerely.
3.我默默地想：如果我听父母的话, 这就不会发生了。
“If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently.
4.简在黑暗中不安地躺着, 非常想和汤姆还有她的家人在一起。Anxiously lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her
family.
5.当被其他同学热烈地欢迎时, 她松了一口气。
Warmly welcomed by other classmates, she felt relieved.
6.玛丽十分担忧，如坐针毡。
Terribly/Quite/Extremely worried, Mary felt like sitting on pins and needles.
7.另外两个骑行者看到三个男人被一只凶猛的狼威胁着，完全惊呆了。
The other two cyclists saw three men threatened by a fierce wolf,absolutely/ completely/ totally shocked.
（二）连接性副词
1.【段首句】But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
【续写句】Immediately, absolute darkness ruled the forest.
【这里用时间副词“immediately衔接+环境描写”，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。】
2.The nearer the helicopter got, the more Jane flagged the yellow blouse.
Luckily, the helicopter didn't miss her this time. 直升机靠得越近，简挥黄色衬衣挥得越起劲。幸运的是，这次她没有错过这部直升机。
【这里用Luckily副词衔接，增强行文连贯性】
高考真题1.当所有人围着亚瑟时，他似乎十分担忧。最终，他意识到自己犯了错误。
When the people crowded around Arthur,he seemed quite worried. Finally, he realized that he had made a mistake.
2.【段首句】
Stephen and Martine found the carpet in a corner and carried it to the pool.
【续写句】
Then they found some rope in the garage and tied one end of the rope to the carpet.斯蒂芬和马丁在一个角落里找到了地毯，并把它带到了游泳池里。然后，他们在车库里找到了一些绳子，并把绳子的一端绑在了地毯上。
3.【段首句】The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
【续写句】Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage.
第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。事实上，那是一个小偷进入了我们的厨房和车库。
三、巧用非谓语恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复杂句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样，句子活泼，而且可使表达更简洁、更高级。非谓语动词在写作中的形式主要为doing、done、having done和with的复合结构，其作状语时，主要表示原因、结果或伴随状态。
（一）动词-ing,凸显同一对象同时发生不同的动作。
“老人静坐”==> 坐在夕阳下+看报纸+听广播The old man sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
典例赏析
1.她感到累极了,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.
2.Jane觉得冷得无法忍受,精疲力竭,完全不知道该如何应对这种可怕的情况。Feeling unbearably cold and extremely exhausted,Jane was quite at a loss with how
to cope with the terrible situation.
3.他屏住呼吸,尽力不发出任何声音,免得让人知道他来了。He held his breath, trying to not make the slightest sound that might betray his presence.
4.好奇心切,她从河岸边跑开,穿过田野去追兔子。Burning with curiosity, she ran away from the riverbank and across the field to chase after the rabbit.
5.他痛苦地喘着气,强迫自己站了起来,迈着缓慢的步子,摇摇晃晃地开始走。Gasping with pain, he forced himself to his feet and with slow, shaky steps,and began to walk.
（二）having done 表现动作先后关系
“没有买到票”==> 排了很久队 + 被告知票卖完了
Having queued for 3 hours, he was told that the ticket had been sold out.
典例赏析1. 她在街上漫无目的地逛上好几个小时，感到有点饿，想吃点东西。Having wondered aimlessly in the street for hours,she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat.
2. 说出真相后，他心里轻松了很多，心情放松地回家了。
Having told the truth,he felt easier in his mind and returned home with a
lighter heart.
3.做好充分准备后，她站在窗边，期待着女儿的到来。
Having made full preparations,she stood by the window,expecting the arrival of her daughter.
（三）-ed过去分词凸显被动
“孩子们哭了”==> 被感动 + 哭了Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
典例赏析
1.坐在窗边，他喝着咖啡放松自我。
Seated by the window, he relaxed himself with a cup of coffee.
2.心情沉重地被拉在后面，Jane低下头，她的脸充满了绝望。Left behind with a sinking heart, Jane ducked down her head, her face clouded with a heavy cloud of despair.
3.欣喜万分，他发出一声大叫，好像如处世界之巅。
Thrilled with joy, he let out a cry as if he were on the top of the word.
高考真题
1.【段首句】
Within three years,Bonnie had become a famous ballerina as she wanted.
【续写句】
Guided by the troupe leader,she succeeded in attaining the leading position in the Swan Lake.
三年之内，邦妮就成为了一名著名的芭蕾舞演员。在剧团团长的带领下，她成功地获得了在天鹅湖的领导地位。
2.【段首句】Then, I forced myself to walk to the front of the classroom.
【续写句】Standing in front of all the students made me very nervous, and my legs kept shaking.然后，我强迫自己走到教室的前面。站在所有学生面前使我非常紧张，我的双腿一直在颤抖。
四、巧用介词短语句子开头可以使用表示地点、时间、原因等带有介词的短语，如as a result, just at that moment, on my way back等。
（一）With/Without + 宾语，表示“伴随着……”“有着……”或者“没有……”
1.那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。
The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
【改写】Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
2.【翻译】没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。
It is your recognition and guidance that I wrote the article.
【改写】
Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have written this article.
典例赏析
（1）熊怒吼一声，跑到湖边洗眼睛。With an angry roar, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
（2）那人一言不发，把Kim从摩托车上扶起来，然后平静地走开了。Without saying a word, the man picked Kim up off the scooter and calmly stepped away.
（3）那个瘦小的小伙子毫不犹豫地跳进冰冷湍急的河水中。Without hesitation, the thin young man threw himself into the cold and swift river.
（二）To one’s + 名词，表示“让某人……的是”
【翻译】让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
【改写】To our relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
典例赏析（1）让我们如释重负的是，爸爸拒绝了这个主意。To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea.
（2）让她吃惊的是，她看到的只有森林，远远望去，还有一座白雪皑皑的山顶。To her astonishment, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top.
（二）In+名词，表示“……地”
1.【翻译】她们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。
They kept their eyes open to read the results surprisingly.
【改写】In surprise, they kept their eyes open to read the results.
2.【翻译】刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
【改写】In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
典例赏析（1）他们高兴地唱着跳着进入房间。
In delight, they entered the room, singing and dancing.
（3）他们惊讶地睁着眼睛看结果。
In astonishment, they kept their eyes wide open to read the re
高考真题
1.【段首句】Billie Jean thought to herself.
【续写句】
From that day on, Billie Jean asked her neighbors about any jobs she could do.比利吉自己想。从那天起，比莉·琼问她的邻居关于她能做的任何工作。
2.【段首句】
After what seemed a century, the rescue boat finally broke through the thick fog , with Hans standing up in the bow(船头), waving to the waiting crowds．
【续写句】On seeing the boat, the crowd, who had been waiting with anxiety, now burst into cheers.经过一个世纪的努力，救援船终于冲破了浓雾，汉斯站在船头（船头），向等待的人群挥手。焦急地等待着船上的人群，立刻爆发了欢呼声。
3.【段首句】
That classmate’s comment was like a sharp knife, cutting Jack’s heart into pieces.
【续写句】For several days, he was in low spirits.
那个同学的评论就像一把锋利的刀，把杰克的心切成了碎片。好几天，他精神很低落。
五、巧用形容词短语形容词（短语）在句中作状语，表达人物做某个动作的原因、结果或状态，可放在句首或句末，增强感染力，使描述更生动形象。
（一）adj. + to do（形容词+不定式）, 主+谓
1.【翻译】萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
【改写】Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room.
2.【翻译】那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话说不出来，他惊呆了。Bob was unable to say a word and was frozen because of the horrible scene.
【改写】Unable to say a word, Bob was frozen because of the horrible scene.
（二）adj.+as/ though +主谓 (as引导倒装句), 主+谓
【翻译】尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
Though she was weak, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
【改写】Weak as she was, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
（三）adj. and adj.（并列情绪形容词）, 主+谓
【翻译】妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。As she was speechless and happy, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
Speechless and happy, she held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
（四）adj.+that从句（情绪形容词+从句）, 主+谓
【翻译】突然一只兔子从马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature,I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature,I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse
高考真题
1.段首句
“Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
【续写句】Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.我怕会伤害到这个可爱的小生物，不自觉地大叫了一声，喝住我的马。
2.【段首句】“We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
【续写句】Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.我又累又饿，想知道我们能不能找到回去的路。
五、巧用对话对话 (dialogue) 是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。它可以用来揭示人物的性格和个性，它也可以用来推动情节向前发展，并展示情节发展的过程。
（一）对话的构
“I don’t think the soldiers like us,” said Samuel, who looked as if he was about to cry.（语言，标签词，描述）
（二）（二）加语气“I would love to,” said Emily，in a pleasant tone. “我很乐意这样做，”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说。【“in a pleasant tone. ”，即“用一种愉快的语气”，基本结构为：in a/an+形容词+tone】
（三）加嗓音“I didn’t mean to,” she murmured in a low voice. “我不是故意的，”她低声说。【“ in a low voice”，即“小声地说道”或者“用一种...声音”，基本结构是：in a/an+形容词+voice】
（四）加情感
“I...I.. don’t think I’m right for the part,”I replied with embarrassment.“我...我..认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。
【“ with embarrassment”，即“（伴随着）难堪”，基本结构是：with +情感名词。如with excitement （伴随着）激动】
（五）加副词
“I will never do that again,” I answered firmly. “我再也不会那样做了，”我坚定地回答。
高考真题【段首句】The car abruptly stopped in front of him.【续写句】“Get into the car,”Paul shouted at Mac.“上车吧。”保罗对着麦克喊道。
六、巧用无灵主语无灵主语句，指用无生命的事物做主语，用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语，因此这类句子常常自带拟人化的修辞色彩，把没有生命的东西，赋予生命力，从而增加了主语的多样性，使语言更加生动化。
（一）用于情感状态的抽象名词作主语+谓语
【常见的情绪名词】happiness, joy, delight 开心快乐；excitement兴奋；surprise, astonishment 惊奇惊讶；shame 羞耻羞愧；anger 愤怒；despair 绝望；regret 遗憾后悔；sorrow 悲伤；horror 惊恐；anxiety 焦虑；disappointment 失望沮丧；satisfaction 满意满足；puzzlement 困惑不解；eagerness渴望等。
【常见的谓语动词】seize 侵袭；choke 噎住堵住；flood 充满；creep 不知不觉产生；grip 紧抓；give way to ；wash over 洗涤侵袭；deserted 丢弃遗弃；well up涌出等。
1.【翻译】他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。He felt a bit sad inside him.
【改写】A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.
2.突然她看到一个熟悉的身影,内心涌起一阵兴奋.
Suddenly she felt very excited when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her when she
caught sight of a familiar figure.
（二）行为动作的名词作主语+谓语
【常见的行为动作类名词】thought想法, glance一瞥, look看到, idea想法, feeling感受, walk走路；sight看到等。
【常见的谓语动词】overwhelm 压倒；strike 打击侵袭；arouse 唤起；remind 想起；fill... with 充满...；change 改变；bring 带来等。
1.【翻译】我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.I noticed a flash of movement.I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement
caught my attention.
2.【翻译】眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。With tears streaming down her face, he couldn’t say a word.
【改写】Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face.
（三）体部位/音容笑貌类名词+谓语
【常见的部位外貌类名词】face；laughter；smile；tear；words 说的话等。
【常见的谓语动词】light up，brighten 照亮；linger 继续存留；well up 涌出；flash 闪烁；crumple 弄皱等。
【翻译】当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
When the host announced that I won the first prize, my heart was thumping/pounding with excitement.
（四）时间/地点/场景类名词+谓语
【常见的时间、地点类名词】silence，hush安静沉默；dusk 黄昏；dawn 黎明破晓；morning；afternoon；night等。
【常见的谓语动词】see 看见；witness 见证；find 发现；fall 降临进入等。
典例赏析
① The post war years in Germany saw honors heaped upon the great scientist.
德国战后的岁月里，这位伟大的科学家得到了种种荣誉。
② Beijing has witnessed great changes in recent years.
北京见证了最近几年的的巨大变化。③ The year 1949 witnessed the founding of the People’s Republic of China.
1949年中华人民共和国成立了。
④ Dusk found the little girl crying in the street.
黄昏时分人们发现小女孩在街上哭。⑤ That chilly afternoon witnessed him trudging in the snow.
那个寒冷的下午，他在雪地里跋涉。
⑥ Night has fallen over the country. 夜幕已经笼罩着乡间。
（五）自然现象类名词+谓语
【常见的自然现象类名词】sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog雾，mist薄雾；rain；earthquake 地震等。
【常见的谓语动词】blanket 覆盖；come；bring；prevent 妨碍阻止；strike 打击侵袭；threaten 威胁/即将来临等。
典例赏析
①An earthquake comes like a thief in the night, without warning.
地震到来，犹如夜贼，不做预告。
②A heavy rain visited the city. 这个城市刚下过一场大雨。
③The rain prevented me from coming. 因为下雨，我不能来。
④The thick fog blanketed the field. 浓雾笼罩着整个大地。
⑤The snow scrunched underfoot.雪在脚下发出嘎吱嘎吱的声音。
⑥In the severe winter, another snowstorm attacked the whole world.寒冬，又一场暴风雪侵袭了整个世界。
专题2 如何设置合理结尾
一、首尾呼应：首尾呼应，形成闭环。文章的开头和结尾在内容上要有着密切的关系，对同一情况做出解释、说明，使文章浑然一体，更有突显文章主旨大意的作用。
例题1.2017年高考真题【与健忘妈妈一块去旅游】
【开头】I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. 我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱心的、温柔的，但心不在焉且健忘的。
【结尾】Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。
【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次重申妈妈的性格，深化主题，首尾呼应。】
例题
2.2018年高考真题【爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路】
【开头】It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.那年夏天，爸爸想带我去一次前所未有的度假。他决定带我去西部荒野之旅。
【结尾】Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。这次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次提及这次西部荒野之旅，深化主题，首尾呼应。】
例题3.2016年高考真题【亚瑟的欢乐经历】
【开头】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.一天，亚瑟在上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
结尾：
What a funny day.Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience.
多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。【结尾时候回到文章的开头再次提及这次欢乐经历，深化主题，首尾呼应。】
例题
4.【2023 年新高考I&I 卷】
【开头】
When I was in middle school,my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing.
结尾：
I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.
例题
4.【 2020年高考I卷】【开头】The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline ,some people in the town had lost their jobs .Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet .People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.麦迪斯一家住在一个小社区。由于经济衰退，镇上的许多人都失业了。许多家庭都在艰难维持生计。人们也在努力帮助彼此迎接这次的挑战。
【结尾】Bernard business worked out quite well .The smile on his face was as brilliant as the sun on a spring day .He also decided to do what he could to help those in need.
伯纳德的买卖很顺利。他脸上的笑容就像春日里的阳光那样灿烂。他也决定尽他所能去帮助那些有需要的人。
【结尾呼应开头那句人们都在相互帮助渡过难关，再次凸显人们在困难时相互帮助的主题。】
二、人物动作的画面定格：读后续写中营造画面感可以增强文章的可读性和真实感，引导读者进入情节，更好地理解故事发生的背景和人物性格。在文章的结尾以人物的动作描写勾勒出一个画面，给读者留下深刻的印象。
例题1.2017年6月浙江卷
When Mac gradually regained his calm,three friends waved goodbye to Paul and Becky until their car disappeared into a line of sight.And the three friends continued their bicycle trip to Alaska pleasantly.
Mac慢慢恢复了平静，三个朋友向Paul和Becky挥手告别，直到他们的车消失在视线中。三个朋友继续愉快地进行他们到阿拉斯加的自行车之旅。
【动作画面定格】
And the three friends continued their bicycle trip to Alaska pleasantly.
例题
3.【2021年高考浙江卷6月】
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about.They were worried that I was too selfish to give.I realized that my labor was very hard,but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents!Dad never complained about unfairness!He even seemed to think that was fair.I thought,“I’ve only worked for two weeks,but how many years my father has worked!”In the evening,Dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
我立刻明白了父母在担心什么。他们担心我太自私了，不能给予。我意识到我的劳动非常辛苦，但我的成长和我们整个家庭一直依赖于我父母的辛勤工作！爸爸从不抱怨不公平！他甚至似乎认为这是公平的。我想：“我只工作了两个星期，但我父亲工作了多少年！晚上，爸爸回来了。我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。
【动作画面定格】
In the evening,Dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
例题3.【2021年新高考全国I卷】
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her,she was very surprised.It was not only the gift,but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.The two children could finish cooking a breakfast,which she didn’t expect.The children said loudly,“Happy Mother’s Day!”Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
【动作画面定格】Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.三、主题升华：记叙文的结尾融入自己的观点和评价，精彩的结尾可以凸显文章的主题，升华事件的意义，起到画龙点睛的作用。
（一）名言式结尾法使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。
【积极向上主旨升华句】
1.It 's never too late to learn.Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
活到老学到老。每个人都应有权利去接受更多的挑战，做出更多的尝试。
2.There is a crack in everything . That is how the light gets in .
万物皆有裂隙，那是光照进来的地方。
3.Every cloud has a sliver lining .朵朵乌云衬银边／黑暗中总有一线光明。4.Where there is a will , there is a way .有志者事竟成。
5.No pains, no gains.不劳无获。
【追求梦想主旨句】
1.Life without dreams is like a bird without wings.人生没有梦想，就像鸟儿没有翅膀。
2.Where there is dream, there is hope. 哪里有梦想，哪里就有希望。3. A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step .千里之行，始于足下。
【助人为乐主旨句】
1.Roses given , fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰，手留余香。2.Sow the wind and reap the whirlwind.种下的是风，收获的是飓风。/恶有恶报。3.Small kindness can bring rich reward.小的善举可以带来丰富的回报。4.Small act can bring / contribute to / give rise to a big difference.
小小举动，大大影响。
4..Never underestimate the power / value of our actions.永远不要低估行动的力量。6.No act of kindness , no matter how small , is ever wasted.无论多小的善举都不会是白费。
7.The miracle is this : the more we share the more we have.这就是奇迹：分享的越多，收获的越多。
例题1.
【2022年高考浙江卷1月】
One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case.He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits.I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it.We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.Our hard work paid off and Dr.Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings.From this project,we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。听到这个消息，我感到非常遗憾，我想无论如何我都应该去看他。当我带着一些鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出做我们项目的其余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法以完善它。我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤工作得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。
【结尾升华】
Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
例题2.【2022年新高考全国1卷】
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started.It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children,not to mention a child with a brain disease.David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses,though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers.It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission.Classmates all appeared on the racing track,cheering for him.“Come on!You can make it!We are proud of you!”they shouted enthusiastically.To everyone’s joy,he reached the final line and ranked the 20th.It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.我看着大卫和其他跑步者一起走到起跑线上。比赛开始了。对于年幼的孩子来说，跑道似乎非常长，更不用说患有脑病的孩子了。大卫坚持要跑，好像他忘记了他所有的弱点，尽管他在几公里内被绊倒了。没过多久，他又重新振作起来，继续他的使命。同学们都出现在赛道上，为他加油。“来吧！你可以做到！我们为你感到骄傲！“他们热情地喊道。令所有人高兴的是，他到达了最后一条线，排名第20位。他是否获得第一名并不重要。正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，才能让不寻常的事情最终发生。
【结尾升华】
It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
（二）情感升华法：每一个故事的创作不止为了讲清楚一件事情的来龙去脉，还要包含作者想要表达的寓意，想与读者分享的感悟，这种思想往往贯穿全文，并在故事结尾时得到升华，在读后续写的结尾部分可以采用情感升华的方式，让读者产生情感上的共鸣，激发读者思考。
【励志故事】
1.This story teaches us that with perseverance,we can overcome any obstacle and achieve greatness.这个故事告诉我们，凭借毅力，我们可以克服任何障碍，实现伟大。
2.Their unwavering determination and resilience turned ordinary lives into extraordinary ones.他们坚定的决心和韧性为他们平凡的生活增添了不非凡的色彩。
3.The closing chapter of this inspiring tale reminds us that dreams are within reach, and the human spirit is limitless.这个鼓舞人心的故事的结尾提醒我们，梦想是可以实现的，人的精神是无限的。
4.They transformed setbacks into stepping stones and proved that true strength comes from within.他们将挫折化作跃升的踏脚石，证明真正的力量源自内心。
【家庭关系】
1.Mother's Day is a heartfelt reminder to honor and appreciate the selfless sacrifices and boundless love that mothers give, shaping our lives with unwavering dedication.
母亲节是一个深情的提醒，要尊重和感激母亲们无私的奉献和无尽的爱，她们用坚定的奉献塑造了我们的生活。
2.Their bond as parent and child grew strong,united by love that knows no boundaries.
作为父母和子女的纽带变得坚固，被无边界的爱所团结。
3.They discovered the beauty of a lifelong parent-child connection,bringing them strength and comfort through laughter and tears.
他们发现了终生父母与子女之间的美，无论欢笑还是泪水，都给予他们力量和安慰。
4.With gratitude in their hearts,they realized that the true treasure of a parentchild relationship lies in the moments of connection,creating a lifelong bond that goes beyond words.
怀着感激之情，他们意识到父母与子女关系真正的宝藏在于连接的时刻，创造了一种超越言语的终生纽带。
【助人为乐】
1.They realized that helping others brings happiness and leaves a lasting
impact.
他们意识到帮助他人可以带来快乐并留下持久的影响。
2.In the end,they discovered that true fulfillment comes from selflessly
assisting
others, creating a world where compassion knows no limits.
最终，他们发现真正的满足来自于无私地帮助他人，创造一个慈悲无限的世界。
2.From this experience,they understood that by helping others,they not only brightened someone else's life but also found purpose and satisfaction
in their own.通过这次经历，他们明白了通过帮助他人，不仅点亮了别人的生活，也在自己的生活中找到了目标和满足。
3.They realized that a small act of kindness has the power to create a chain reaction, touching and inspiring countless lives.
他们意识到一小片善举有着创造连锁反应的力量，触动和激励了无数生命。
【人与动物】
1.They learned that living in harmony with animals brings joy and teaches us the importance of love, respect, and interconnection.他们学到了与动物和谐相处带来喜悦，并教会我们爱、尊重和相互联系的重要性。
2.Through their experiences,they realized that the bond between humans and animals is built on love, trust, and mutual respect, enriching both lives.
通过经历，他们意识到人类与动物之间的纽带建立在爱、信任和相互尊重的基础上，使彼此的生活更加丰富。
3.They discovered the wisdom of living in harmony with nature, nurturing a deep appreciation for the delicate balance between humans and animals.他们发现与自然和谐共处的智慧，培养了对人类与动物之间微妙平衡的深刻赞赏。
4.Their compassion and empathy taught them the invaluable lesson that treating animals with kindness and respect creates a world of love and harmony.他们的慈悲和同理心教给他们宝贵的一课，善待动物并尊重它们创造了一个充满爱和和谐的世界。
【有惊无险】
1.After surviving the thrilling adventure,they felt a mix of relief and excite-ment,cherishing the special bond they formed and the memories they created.
度过惊险的冒险后，他们感到一种释然和兴奋，珍视着他们所建立的特殊纽带和创造的回忆。
2.Looking back at their thrilling journey,they realized that the true joy of adventure lies not only in overcoming danger,but also in the lasting friendships and shared experiences they gained.
回首他们的惊险之旅，他们意识到冒险的真正乐趣不仅在于战胜危险，还在于持久的友谊和共同的经历。
3.From this adventure,they felt the importance of respecting nature and recognized their own limitations.
从这次冒险中，他们感受到尊敬大自然的重要性，并认识到自己的局限。
4.Through this thrilling experience,we realized that animals have their own territories, and humans should respect their boundaries.通过这次惊心动魄的经历，我们意识到动物有它们自己的领地，人类应该尊重这个界限。
例题
1.【2022年高考浙江卷6月】
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help.
It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them.I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
【结尾升华】
I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need.
我很高兴我以这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。这次经历让我意识到，这个世界上有这么多人需要我们的帮助。这也让我意识到，我们的小善举可以让他们感到温暖，并对他们产生巨大的影响。我永远不会忘记他们得到食物时看着我的样子。我急于敦促世界尽一切可能帮助那些有需要的人。
例题2.【2022年新高考1卷】【残障男孩参加越野跑】His usual big toothy smile came back again as the spectators and participants cheered loudly for him when he crossed the finishing line.
【结尾升华】
The boy transformed setbacks into stepping stones and proved that true strength comes from within.
例题3.【2021年新高考1卷】【双胞胎为母亲做早餐】Hearing the words, their mother was moved to tears and she believed that the breakfast was the best Mother’s Day gift she had ever received.
【结尾升华】
It was a heartfelt reminder of the selfless sacrifices of their mom and the deep gratitude of her children.
例题4.【2020年新高考1卷】【Meredith启发孩子帮助社区贫困家庭】Bernard not only earned money to buy medicine for his dad,but was also determined to pass down all the support he had received from Meredith family to other people.
[结尾升华]
More importantly, Mrs. Meredith’s children realized that helping others brings them happiness and leaves a lasting impact on other people.
例题5.【2023年1月浙江卷】【救助被困的蜂鸟】
Then,the hummingbird took off,circling around me a few times before disappearing into the trees. I stood there, feeling touched by the encounter.
[结尾升华]
I realized the bond between humans and animals is built on love, trust, and mutual respect.
例题6.【2022年1月浙江卷】
【同学关系】
Moved by his trust, I worked day and night to prepare for the presentation. Eventually, it earned the highest scores.
[结尾升华]:
More importantly, after that experience, our friendship grew stronger as we embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side.
例题7.【2020年7月浙江卷】
【拍摄北极熊的探险经历】I raised my camera again and kept pressing the shutter, trying to capture the last glimpse of this huge beast before it vanished from my sight and my life.
[结尾升华]:
Through this thrilling experience, we realized that animals have their own territories, and humans should respect their boundaries.
四、写景画面定格 通过描绘细致的场景，给读者留下更深刻、更美好的记忆，并且让他们感到情节仿佛就在眼前，更容易产生代入感。
（一）黎明到来的画面
1.The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.
天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。
2.Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean,bestowing a golden path from
the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
（二）日落时的画
1.The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.
当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。2.The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.
逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
（三）夜空的画面
1.The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
2.Dotted with glittering stars,the sky,midnight blue,gave the scene a fairy
tale quality.
例题【2021年新高考全国I卷】
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning.
【场景画面定格】Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.然后杰夫注意到蒸汽从锅里喷出来，盖子开始摇晃。下一分钟，粥沸腾了，灭火了。珍娜惊慌失措。值得庆幸的是，杰夫保持冷静，迅速关掉了煤气。但是炉子现在一团糟。珍娜告诉杰夫清理一下，这样他们就可以继续煮剩下的粥了。但是杰夫的手碰到了热火器，他发出了痛苦的叫声。珍娜让他把手放在冷水中。然后她闻到了燃烧的味道。哦，天啊！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。
五、对话结尾对话 (dialogue) 是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。它可以用来揭示人物的性格和个性，它也可以用来推动情节向前发展，并展示情节发展的过程。顺着文中所叙述之事的自然发展，以简单的对话收尾，适合记叙文续写，简单灵活，精心构建的对话可以感染读者，从而起到升华主题的作用。例题
1.【2022年新高考全国I卷】My heart sank.As I started to shout encouragement,other voices around me took up the call.“Come on David,you can do it!”David picked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause.
【人物对话】Then, when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!”我的心沉了下去。当我开始大声鼓励时，我周围的其他声音接听了电话。“来吧大卫，你可以做到的！”大卫振作起来，重新开始，直到他在疯狂的欢呼和掌声中越过终点线。然后，当大卫的教练拍打他的背，自豪地说：“干得好，大卫！”他吸引了我的视线，冲我露出一个露齿的笑容，说：“这很容易！
例题2.【2021新高考I卷】
At this moment, their father joined them and said to his wife, “Eliza, I envy you.” Jenna comforted her father cheerfully.
【人物对话】
“No worries dad, mum has her breakfast today, and you’ll have your dinner when Father’s day comes.”
3 如何写出高分句式
“读后续写”第一要真正读懂原文，第二写出恰当又正确的句子，第三才是写作技巧。读懂原文之后写出恰当而正确的句子很重要，否则你的“读懂”只是在做无用功。只有写出符合故事情节恰当、正确的句子才说明你真正读懂了。作文的高分关键是“规范的书写+整洁的卷面+正确流畅的语言+丰富的句式”，其中读后续写还要注重情节的逻辑性、衔接性、合理性。写作中，有好句，才有亮点，有亮点，就容易拿高分。
一、情绪描写常用句式（一）表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景
【句式1】a flush of＋表情绪的名词＝a wave/feeling/sense of... 一阵……
【句式2】表情绪的名词＋flooded over sb/swept over sb/seized sb ……涌上心头
【句式3】a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling of＋表情感状态的名词＋有灵动词＋sb.表示"某人感到……"或"一阵/一种……向某人袭来"。
A wave of joy washed over /seized /enveloped /struck him when he heard the news
当他听到消息，他非常高兴。
（happiness /sadness /sorrow /delight /panic /fear /horror /depression /guilt /embarrassment /hate /regret /panic /jealousy /envy /pride /shame /anxiety /boredom /relief /satisfaction /humiliation /insecurity /irritation /isolation /loneliness /misery /outrage /rage /resentment /torture）
1.A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children.
＝He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
当他看着自己孩子的时候， 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。
2.(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.And much sooner than could be expected Bernard returned with an empty basket. Never before had he earned so much money in his life.A wave of happiness flooded over him.
一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。伯纳德带着一个空篮子回来，比预期的要快得多。他一生中从未挣过这么多钱。他感到高兴极了。
1.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
To my surprise, I learned that my essay had ranked first in the contest. A mix of excitement and doubt washed over me.
令我吃惊的是，我得知我的作品在比赛中排名第一。兴奋和怀疑涌上心头。2.Suffering and despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.
(《简·爱》) 痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。
2.(2021·新高考I卷）Mother felt a wave of pride and warmth sweep over her.
妈妈感到一阵自豪和温暖。
3.(2020·浙江卷）
The polar bear came near.Horror slowly crept on/flooded over/rushed over/
swept over us.
北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。
二表示“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳”场景
【句式1】sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest 感到心在胸中怦怦直跳
【句式2】one's heart thumped /raced /beat wildly /loudly /hard某人心怦怦直跳
1．(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
I could feel my heart pounding wildly as I went on stage to collect the prize.上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。
4.He unfolded the letter,his heart racing.
他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。
5.(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Their hearts began to thump wildly as they were afraid of being scolded by their
father.
天哪！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他们害怕被父亲责骂，心开始怦怦直跳。
（四）表示“流泪”场景
【句式1】One's eyes got misty. /One's eyes misted with tears. 泪眼模糊
【句式2】be close to tears 几乎要哭了
【句式3】tears roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face 泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下1．My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.当得知我被重点大学录取时，我母亲差点儿就哭了。
2.With tears of gratitude rolling/streaming down his cheeks,Peter hugged Green tightly, saying “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”
感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下，彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林，说：“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
3.The day he left hospital, he hugged me,his eyes misting with tears, saying，“You are a truly good nurse, thank you.”
出院那天，他泪眼模糊地拥抱着我说，“你是个真正的好护士，谢谢你。”
（五）常用句型归纳
【句式1】So 情绪adj. was sb that +从句
【句式2】What 情绪v. sb was that +从句
【句式3】Much/Greatly to one’s 情绪n., sb did sth
1.So sad was Tom that tears welled up in his eyes. 汤姆伤心得眼泪夺眶而出。2.So guilty was my mom that she lowered her head and murmured, “Sorry.”
我妈妈非常内疚，她低下头喃喃地说：“对不起。
3.What surprised us was that he made great progress in such a short time.
令我们惊讶的是，他在这么短的时间内取得了长足的进步。
4.What frightened him was that he suddenly realized that maybe the young man was the bank robber.
令他害怕的是，他突然意识到，也许这个年轻人就是那个银行劫匪。
5.Being the coach of the new team,I was excited because I knew we were going to win,but to my disappointment we were defeated.
作为新球队的教练，我很兴奋，因为我知道我们会赢，但令我失望的是，我们被击败了。
6.Much to the family’s surprise, Dennis stuck to his promise!
令家人惊讶的是，丹尼斯信守诺言！
二、动作描写常用句式（一）表示“一……，就……”场景
【句式1】upon/on＋n./doing...“一……就……”，相当于as soon as引导的时间状语从句。
【句式2】immediately/directly/instantly＋从句
【句式3】the moment/minute/instant＋从句
【句式4】no sooner...than.../hardly...when...
【句式5】at the sight/thought of…
1.The instant I saw him,I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box. 我一看见他，就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。
2.(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
“Ignore what the players from other teams would say and I believe you could make it”Upon hearing my words,David beamed a big smile,stood up and moved towards the starting line.
“不管其他队的队员怎么说，我相信你能做到！”听到我的话，大卫笑了笑，站起来朝起跑线走去。
3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
Upon hearing this,I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my mind going unconsciously back to the days I racked my brain for stories.
一听到这些话，我感到心跳加快，大脑不由自主回到那些绞尽脑汁编故事的日子。
4.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
No sooner had I stepped into this familiar room than I saw my teacher sitting among piles of papers.我刚一走进这个熟悉的房间就看到历史坐在一堆试卷前。
5.(2023·浙江1月卷读后续写)
I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.一看到这个感恩的蜂鸟我感到一阵宽慰和敬畏，当我爬进车里开走时我知道我会珍惜这些一起分担的记忆。
（二）表示“迫不及待做……；毫不犹豫”场景
【句式1】sb could hardly wait to do sth
【句式2】without a second thought...不假思索；毫不犹豫地
【句式3】without even thinking...连考虑都不考虑
【句式4】without delay...立即；毫不迟延地.
【句式5】without hesitation...毫不犹豫
1．The water was freezing cold,but without a second thought the young man jumped in.水冰冷冰冷，可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。
2．Without delay, he climbed up the tree quickly to reach for the leaf.他毫不迟疑地迅速爬上树去摘树叶。
3．On Christmas morning, I could not wait to open the package. To my excitement, it was a brandnew pair of ice skates which I was eager for.圣诞节早晨，我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是，这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。
4. (2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)My devotion and perseverance really mattered, but without his encouragement, I could never be what I was today. 我的付出和坚持固然重要，但是没有他的鼓励我就不会有今天的成就。
（六）表示“因……颤抖”场景
【句式1】tremble/shake with fear, panic, excitement, rage...
1．Her lips trembled with rage and big tears rolled down her cheeks.
她气得嘴唇发抖，泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。
2．He lay there for a long time, shaking with fear.
他躺在那里很长时间，害怕得发抖。
3．Farmer Mike's house had been a great place for the little mouse until the farmer married a wife who had a cat. Zigfried shook with fear when he thought of it.
农夫迈克的房子对小老鼠来说一直是一个好地方，直到农夫娶了一个养猫的妻子。Zigfried一想到这件事就吓得直哆嗦。
4．Suddenly, the donkey uttered a shrill cry. The tiger trembled with fear, thinking that the donkey was going to kill it.突然，驴子大叫一声，老虎以为驴子要把自己吃掉，吓得直打哆嗦。
（四）表示 “发出……(声音)”场景
【句式1】There were loud shouts and cheers (from...) when...从……传来喊叫与欢呼声
【句式2】There was a storm of applause (from...) when...……响起了雷鸣般的掌声【句式3】let out a cry /scream (of horror /fear /terror /shock /surprise /pain...)发出了……叫声
1．The night before last,just before dinner,while my father was looking through the evening paper, he suddenly let out a cry of surprise.
前天晚上，就在晚饭前，我父亲在看晚报时，突然惊讶地喊了一声。
2．While my mind was wandering,our performance time came.It turned out a great success,loud shouts and cheers from the audience filling the theatre.
当我心不在焉的时候，我们的表演时间到了。这场演出取得了巨大成功，观众的欢呼声和喝彩声响彻了整个剧场。
（六）表示 “带着情绪做某事”场景
【句式1】情绪adj., sb did sth
【句式2】Sb did sth, adj（短语）
【句式3】Adj. as 主+谓, sb did sth
1.Suddenly something inside me began saying, “Try it! Try it!” Shy and scared, I watched them, trying not to look too eager. 突然间，我内心的某个东西开始说：“试试吧！试试吧！我又害羞又害怕，看着他们，尽量不让自己看起来太急切。
2.Exhausted and scared, Jane lay down near a stone, missing her family. 疲惫和害怕的简躺在一块石头旁边，想念她的家人。
3.She stood there in shock, unsure of what to do next. 她震惊地站在那里，不知道下一步该怎么做。4.He ran out again, unaware that I was following him.他又跑了出去，不知道我在跟着他。
4.Weak as Jane was, she picked up speed along the stream to find the way back. 虽然简很虚弱，但她加快了沿着溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。
（六）常用句型归纳
【句式1】adv., sb did sth
【句式2】With growing +情绪n, Sb did sth
【句式3】Sb did sth, with/in +抽象名词with +抽象名词(care, confidence, ease, patience, pride, eagerness, interest, caution, attention, seriousness, kindness, calmness, determination, anxiety, curiosity, courage, joy, devotion, fear, sadness, satisfaction)
in + 抽象名词 (peace, excitement, anger, amazement, relief, confusion, excitement, admiration, puzzlement, shock, secret, anger, terror, horror)
1.Tenderly, grandma placed her hand on Susan’s head and comforted, “as long as you realize your fault, you will still my little girl!” 奶奶温柔地把手放在苏珊的头上，安慰道：“只要你意识到自己的过错，你还是我的小女儿！
2.Carefully,I cleaned up the broken pieces of the ball,wishing I could stick them together.
我小心翼翼地清理了球的碎片，希望我能把它们粘在一起。
3.With growing fear, Elli and I packed up our camp as quickly as possible.
随着恐惧的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我们的营地。
4.With growing anxiety, I shouted at the top of my lung, “Help!” 随着焦虑的增加，我大声喊道：“救命！
5.My father drove in silence. 我父亲默默地开车。
6.I took out the folded paper with great care, and opened it. 我小心翼翼地拿出折叠好的纸，打开了它。
三、心理描写常用句式（一）表示“不知道做……”场景
【句式1】sb did sth, wondering what to do next
【句式2】sb did sth, not knowing what to do next
【句式3】sb did sth, unsure of what to do next
【句式4】sb was at a loss what to do
1．(2023·浙江1月卷读后续写)
Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now.
离开家，我禁不住想现在进展如何呢。
2．(2021·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
David sat still with a deep breath,wondering what to do next.I said gently and quietly，“No one can change your mind,except yourself.If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.”
大卫静静地坐着，深呼吸，不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说：“除了你自己，没有人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己，那与别人的想法无关。”
3.Facing the situation,Ruth felt her heart was poundingand chest pains almost took her breath away. She started to sob，totally at a loss what to do.
面对这种情况，露丝感到心跳加速，胸痛几乎让她喘不过气来。她开始哭泣，完全不知该怎么办。
（七）表示“心里想”场景
【句式1】An inner voice told sb that...内心的声音告诉某人……
【句式2】An inner voice whispered, “…”/ Sb thought / said to oneself, “…”
【句式3】Doing sth,sb felt as if sb did sth / sb had done sth
1.An inner voice whispered, “Stay clear-headed. I can make it.”
一个内心的声音低声说：“保持清醒的头脑。我能做到。
2.An inner whispered, “You can do this.” 一个内在的人低声说：“你可以做到。
3.Looking at the man, she felt as if she had known him for years. 看着这个男人，她觉得自己好像认识他很多年了。
4.Talking about pyramids, he felt as if he had seen them himself.
说起金字塔，他觉得自己好像亲眼见过金字塔。
（八）表示“虚拟语气”场景
【句式1】Had it not been for / Without / But for +n, sb would not have done sth
【句式2】情态动词+did/have done
【句式3】 if only+did/had done
1.But for your guidance, we would not have settled the problem.
如果没有您的指导，我们无法解决问题。
2.Had it not been for the experience, we would not have made a new friend.
如果不是这次经历，我们就不会结交新朋友。
（九）表示“某人想到”场景
【句式1】An idea, thought ...+ hit/struck/occurred to + sb.t
【句式2】sth.crossed/flashed through/sprang to/came to/popped into/jumped out of sb.'s mind
【句式3】one's mind began to race/one's mind raced
某人开始转动脑筋／某人拼命地转动脑筋
1.(2021新高考I卷）
It hit/struck/occurred to/dawned on them that they could make breakfast for mother to celebrate Mother's Day.
他们突然想到他们可以给妈妈做早餐庆祝母亲节。
2.(2021·浙江卷）
I was struck/hit by the thought that I should have my own money and planned how to spend it.
我突然想到我应该有自己的钱，并计划如何使用它。
3.The thought sprang to her mind that maybe she had left the door open when she left home.
她突然想起也许她离开家时没把门关上。
4.A memory of yesterday crossed her mind,and she laughed herself to death
回想起昨天的事，她笑得要死。
5.My mind raced as I tried to work out what was happening.
我拼命地转动脑筋，想要搞清楚发生了什么事儿。
6.My mind raced, trying to think of a place to have a picnic.我的脑子飞快地转着，努力想一个野餐的地方。
四、情节发展常用句式（一）表示“直到……才意识到……”场景
【句式1】Not until＋时间状语＋did sb realize/notice that...
【句式2】It was only＋时间状语＋that sb realized that...
1．Not until then did he realize that something was wrong.
It was only then that he realized that something was wrong.
直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。
2.(2022·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.The race started.It was only then that I realized that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease.
我看着大卫和其他赛跑者一起向起跑线上移动。比赛开始了。就在那时，我才意识到跑道对小孩子来说太长了，更不用说一个患有心脏病的孩子了。
3.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)
Eager and delighted,I held up the championship trophy,and It was not until then that I realized the journey of writing was not only filled with disbelief and self-doubt but also support and self-approval.
我急切又高兴地举起奖杯。指导那时我才意识到写作的历程不仅充满着不相信和自我怀疑，而且还充满着支持和自我肯定。
（三）表示“某人想到/明白……；有了主意”场景
【句式1】It suddenly occurred to sb that...＝It hit/struck sb that...
【句式2】(idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb＝...came/flashed into one's mind＝...crowded into one's mind【句式3】one's mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动1．Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind.
突然他想到一个好主意。
2．His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out.
他的头脑开始快速转动，试图想出办法。
4.There was no meal on the table.“Let's prepare for the party together this time，”Aunt Beatrice said gladly dressed in the same outfit.It suddenly occurred to Mya that the theme this year was supposed to be “Sweet Labor, Sweet Sixteen”．
桌上没有饭菜。“这次让我们一起准备聚会吧，”Beatrice阿姨穿着同样的衣服高兴地说。Mya突然想到，今年的主题应该是“甜蜜的劳动，甜蜜的十六岁”。
（四）表示“转折”场景
【句式1】But bad luck for sb...但是某人真不走运
【句式2】To one's surprise (delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that...让人惊讶(高兴)/奇怪的是，原来……
【句式3】..., but in vain 。…… ，但徒劳
【句式4】.., but without success……，但没有成功
【句式5】But on second thoughts，...但是转而一想，……
1．But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground.Jack
真不走运，他绊了一脚，摔在地上。
2．Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him,but in vain.
她朋友想劝她和他一起回家，可只是白费唇舌。
3．When I got up and looked out of the bedroom window, I found,to my great surprise, it was snowing heavily.当我站起来，从卧室的窗户往外看时，我惊奇地发现，天正在下大雪。
（五）常用句型归纳
【句式1】Sb did sth, only to find…
【句式2】地点状语(in the box...) lay / was / were +主语
【句式3】out of +地点/out/into +地点/in/away/off +walked (rushed /stormed...) +主语
【句式4】At the thought/sight/sound of sth, sb did sth
【句式5】On /Upon doing sth, sb did sthon/upon后面的动名词多为：go, arrive, leave, reach, return, step, enter等。
1.I turned back to the tractor, only to find it move suddenly away from me.
我转身走向拖拉机，却发现它突然从我身边移开了。
2.I stopped teaching and open it up. In the box were a shirt and a note from Freddy’s mother. 停止了教学，打开了它。盒子里有一件衬衫和一张弗雷迪母亲的纸条。
3.Inside the bottle was a piece of paper. 瓶子里有一张纸。
4.Out of the house rushed a dog, followed by a puppy. 从屋子里冲出一只狗，后面跟着一只小狗。
5.Out dashed Mary, crying all the way. 玛丽冲了出来，一路哭泣。
6.At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror with my palms sweating. 一看到凶猛的狼，我被一股强烈的恐惧感抓住，手心出汗。
7.At the sound of the alarm, the wolf fled into the thick woods警报声响起，狼逃进了茂密的树林中.
8.On arriving at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 到达村子后，我们受到了村民的热烈欢迎。
9.Upon going out of the room, Jack heard the telephone ringing. 走出房间后，杰克听到电话铃声。
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