中考书面表达专题训练
写作步骤
步骤1 认真审题,明确要求
步骤2 分析要点,编制提纲
步骤3 依纲据点,扩展成文
这一步是整个写作过程的关键环节。为保证写作质量,必须注意以下几点:
(1)尽量运用最基本的词汇和句型,写自己最熟悉、最有把握的句子。
(2)尽量多用简单句,少用复合句;多用短句,少用长句;还要注意语言准确,符合英语习惯,尽量避免汉语式的英语。
(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,要沉着冷静,可以通过变换句型的办法来达到目的。例如:用英语表达“外强中干”这个词似乎很难,但我们可以通过简单的单词把意思表达出来:He looks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.。
(4)要用英语思维,尽量避免受汉语影响。例如:表达“他一点都不累”这句话,写成He is not a little tired.意思就完全相反了,应该是:He is not a bit tired.或He is not tired at all.,错句意思是“他非常累”。
(5)不要硬译。书面表达不同于汉译英,它有较大的灵活性,一个要点的表达方式并非是唯一的,只要意思明确,用词正确,都可得分。也就是说,遇到自己不熟悉的词语时,要学会变通,变难为易,一句话正说不行,可以反过来说,如果还不会表达,就再换一种方式。比如:要表达“我花了100元钱买了一件衬衫。”这句话,可以用包含buy、pay、spend或cost的四个不同的句式,对哪一个最熟悉、最有把握就用哪一个。
(6)注意上下文的衔接。根据意思的需要,句子之间要加上必要的连词或过渡词语。and、but、so等常见连词的使用,可使短文衔接自如、结构紧凑。
步骤4 反复检查,查漏补缺
一般来说,文章的修改可以从以下几方面入手:
(1)用词方面
①代词的格和指代关系是否用得正确。
②名词的单复数正确与否。
③形容词的比较级和最高级用得是否正确。
④副词的位置是否合适。
⑤动词的搭配是否准确。
(2)句子方面
①句型结构是否完整。
②主谓是否一致。
③时态、语态、语气是否正确。
必备模板
议论文模版一（如何保护环境，如何保持健康，如何学好英语等）
开篇As we all know, it’s important for us to (protect the environment , keep healthy)
众所周知， **** 对我们来说是非常重要的。
过渡 here is some advice how to ...
这是一些如何****的建议
内容 First of all, we should ...when we ...Second, if we can... our... will be better.
首先，当我们*** 我们应该**** 第二， 如果我们能够***我们的***将会更好。
What’s more, let’s... Last but not least, don’t forget that ...
而且，让我们一起***** 最后但同样重要，不要忘了*******
总结 In short, if we can follow the advice ,I think our.... will be better.
总之，如果我们能遵从这建议，我认为我们的**** 将会更好
保护环境
开篇As we all know, it’s important for us to protect the environment
众所周知， 保护环境 对我们来说是非常重要的。
过度 here is some advice how to protect the environment
这是一些如何** 保护环境**的建议
内容 First of all, we should turn off the light when we leave a room
首先，当我们离开房间 我们应该关灯
Second, if we can walk or ride a bike to work, our environment will be better.
第二， 如果我们能够走路或骑车去工作我们的环境将会更好。
What’s more, let’s plant more trees
而且，让我们一起多种树
Last but not least, don’t forget that saving water is also a good way to protect the environment
最后但同样重要，不要忘了节约用水也是保护环境的一种好方法
总结 In short, if we can follow the advice ,I think our environment
will be better.
总之，如果我们能遵从这建议，我认为我们的环境将会更好
议论文模版二观点争论类（是否应该***）
开篇： As we all know, whether*** should **** has been a hot topic among***
众所周知，***是否应该做*** 在人们中已经成为一个热门的话题
支持：Some people agree with the idea. First of all, they think it’s a good way to****** 一些人同样这个观点。首先，他们认为这是***的一种好方法。
What’s more, we can use it to****** 而且，我们可以使用它去****。
反对： But other people disagree . on the one hand, they think******
但是其他人不同意。一方面，他们认为******
On the other hand, they think**** 另一方面，他们认为******
我的观点：In my opinion, I think we should ******but we should use it properly.
在我看来，我认为我们应该**** 但是我们应该适当的使用它。
学生是否应该带手机去学校
As we all know, whether student should take mobile phone to school has been a hot topic among people
众所周知，学生是否应该带手机去学校 在人们中已经成为一个热门的话题
Some people agree with the idea. First of all, they think it’s a good way to keep in touchwith their parents 一些人同样这个观点。首先，他们认为这是与家长保持联系的一种好方法。
What’s more, we can use it to find some useful information 而且，我们可以使用它去查找一些有用的信息。
But other people disagree . on the one hand, they think students will spend too much time playing games on the phone.但是其他人不同意。一方面，他们认为学生将花太多的时间玩游戏
On the other hand, they think using mobile phone is harmful to students’ health.另一方面，他们认为太经常使用手机对学生的健康有害。
In my opinion, I think we should take mobile phone to school but we should use it properly.
在我看来，我认为我们应该带手机去学校 但是我们应该适当的使用它。
记叙文（必背经典句子）
一．写人
1.王老师是我的英语，1982年出生于福州，是我们班中最好的老师之一。
My English teacher, one of the best teachers in my school, was born in Fuzhou in 1982.
2.我的历史老师是个漂亮的女人。她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发。
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
3.他对科学极有兴趣，也有音乐的天赋
Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
4.他在课上和课后帮助我们
He helped us not only in class but also after class.
5.我希望他将来健康和快乐
I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.
6.毫无疑问，他是我心中上最好的老师。
There is no doubt that he is the best teacher in my heart
7.Jim不但学习优异，而且是个乐于助人、心地善良。
Jim is not only an excellent student but also a helpful and kind person.
二．写景
1.我以前从来没见过如此美丽的地方
I have never seen such a beautiful place before.
2.在我们校园，花儿向你微笑。
In our school garden, there are flowers smiling at you.
3.你可以听到一群女孩子在唱着春天的歌。
You can also hear a group of girls sing songs about spring.
4.福州是福建的首都，也是中国最有活力的城市之一。
Fuzhou is the capital of Fujian and is one of the liveliest cities in China .
5.沿着闽江岸走，你能欣赏美丽的风景。
Walking along the bank of Ming River, you can see beautiful view.
6. 你简直难以想象鼓山顶看这个城市是多么美丽。
You can’t imagine how wonderful the city view was from the top of MountGu.
中考真题精练
一
2020福建中考
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件，向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动，并说明推荐理由。
2.例文点评：本文主要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，句子通顺。
二
2019福建中考
假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。
To:
From:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to tell you that I’ve just won the first place in a robot-making competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun.
What do you think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Harry
参考词汇:congratulation祝贺
注意事项:
1.回复邮件时可适当发挥
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
答案
[写作提示]
1.要求根据收到的电子邮件回复邮件。
2.注意人称的使用。
3.主要内容:
(1)祝贺Harry获奖。
(2)回答对方提出的问题:对机器人有什么看法;是否想拥有自己的机器人;为什么。
4.时态:以一般现在时为主。
三
2018福建中考
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry对武术感兴趣。请你根据图表提示,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,邀请他暑期来观摩你校举办的首届武术节,感受中华武术文化。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所提示的信息2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
参考词汇:practice wushu练武
答案
本题要求学生写一封电子邮件,邮件的格式已给出。写作内容主要包括两方面:
(一)邀请Henry参加学校举办的首届武术节,告知武术节的时间和活动。(二)介绍中国武术的历史及练武的好处。在写作人称上较灵活,可能运用到第一人称、第二人称,介绍中华武术部分还要运用到第三人称。写作时态上:介绍武术节会用到一般将来时;介绍武术历史和益处主要用一般现在时。本题人称、时态要灵活转换,句型上的选用范围较广。
四
2017福建中考
你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示,用英语在QQ中给他留言,介绍并推荐你的家乡福建,词数80左右。
要求:
1.必须包含所有提示信息
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
这是一篇图表类作文。按照图表中的提示具体介绍家乡福建,包括位置、省会、人口、环境、名胜等,时态用一般现在时。
模拟精练
一
诚信是中华民族的传统价值观。英才国际学校英语广播台正在进行“我诚实,我守信”系列人物介绍。请你根据下列表格提示和要求,写一篇介绍陈信同学的文字稿。
基本情况
姓 名
陈 信
班 级
九(2)
主要表现
1.诚实做人,友好待人;
2.有言必行,信守承诺。
具体事例
举例(或诚实,或友好,或守信)予以介绍。
希 望
做一个诚实、守信的人。
参考词汇:integrity诚信,honesty诚实,get on well with与……和睦相处,make a promise许诺,keep a promise守诺,overcome克服,reliable可信赖的
写作要求:1.词数不少于80
2.内容完整,语言流畅,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Good morning, everyone!Today I am glad to introduce a teenager. His name is Chen Xin.
1.人称:第三人称。
2.时态:介绍陈信的基本情况和主要表现时应用一般现在时态。介绍具体事例时应用一般过去时态。表达希望时应用一般将来时态。
3.要点:(1)陈信的基本情况;(2)陈信的主要表现;(3)介绍陈信的具体事例;(4)表达希望。
二
随着中国的发展,世界各地掀起了“汉语热”。作为中国人,我们更应该学好汉语。请以“My Chinese Learning”为题,写一篇短文。
内容包括:1.为什么要学好汉语?
2.谈谈自己学习汉语的经历。
3.介绍1—2条学习汉语的方法。
写作要求:1.词数80左右2.文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
My Chinese Learning
With the development of China,Chinese is becoming more and more popular.
答案
1.本文应用第一人称。
2.主体时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。
3.要点有三个,即
①为什么要学好汉语?
②谈谈自己学习汉语的经历。
③介绍学习汉语的方法。
三
为响应我市全面创建国家卫生城市的号召,某校开展了以“绿色港城,健康生活”为主题的英语征文活动。请你以“The Green City,the Healthy Life”为题,根据表格中的
及文字提示,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。
注意:
(1)词数90左右(2)文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
The Green City,the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lianyungang,it’s our duty to
答案
1.审题:以第一人称为主,主体时态是一般现在时。
2.确定要点:(1)提出主题:
①建设绿色城市是我们的责任;
②这样我们才能过健康的生活。
(2)具体做法:
①骑车出行,减少空气污染;
②垃圾入箱,保持城市整洁;
③多种树木,保护自然环境。
(3)个人观点:考生自拟(至少2条)。
四
你的学校正在开展“诚信”教育,英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示的要点,写一篇演讲稿。
朋友李雷
★爱踢足球、玩游戏、考试舞弊
★学习退步,不被信任
你的观点
★诚信考试,独立完成作业
★说实话,做诚实孩子
★(请补充一点)
要求:1)短文应包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥;
2)词数90左右
3)演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:cheat in the exam; fall behind(落后)
答案
[写作提示]
本文为一篇关于诚信的演讲稿,在演讲稿中用朋友李雷来举例,并要表明你对他的行为的观点看法。文中主要使用第三人称和第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
五
暑假快到了,学校倡导同学们多读书、读好书、以阅读为乐,过一个有意义的假期。请你以“I’ll Enjoy Reading in the Summer Vacation”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语短文与大家分享。
内容要点:
1.阅读的好处:了解世界;带来快乐;……
2.读书计划:寻找好书;用好时间;……
写作要求:必须根据内容要点进行写作,并适当发挥。
温馨提示:短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。
I’ll Enjoy Reading in the Summer Vacation
本文为提纲式作文,带有一定的开放性,写作时首先描述阅读的好处,可以适当发挥。其次描述读书计划。注意在写作时,表达要准确,适当使用高级词汇。
六
新的暑假即将到来,鉴于以往假期中各种事故频发,同学们,请你以“How to keep safe”为主题,用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1.根据一幅或多幅
提示,自主立意构思,要切合图意,可适当发挥;
2.不得出现真实的校名和人名,可用第一人称或第二人称描述;
3.词数80左右
Almost every summer vacation, quite a few students are reported to have accidents. It's important to know how to keep safe.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为图画类作文。
2.写作时要包含以下要点中的一个或多个:
①游泳注意安全,要有同伴;
②远离烟火;
③遵守交通规则;
④注意饮食安全;
⑤注意旅行安全。
2.本文时态以一般现在时为主。
七
初中生活,精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐,展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待,请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。
提示:1.初中阶段你有哪些收获;
2.初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望;
3.你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。
要求:1.80—100词
2.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清晰。
The life of my junior high school is coming to an end.
1.特别注意时态。本篇文章既回忆过去,又展望未来,所以既要用到一般过去时、现在完成时,又要用到一般将来时态。
2.写作要点分解:(1)收获;(2)遗憾或未实现的愿望;(3)计划或打算。
3.注意行文连贯,表达清晰,语法正确。
八
减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
注意:(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息;
(4)参考词汇:提升素养promote literacy。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
1.本文的话题是如何让课余生活更有意义。
2.本文为根据图表所提供的信息进行的半开放式写作。
3.写作时可采用总分总的结构,时态以一般现在时为主,写作内容可有适当拓展和发挥。
九
人生中有很多第一次:第一次学游泳;第一次跟家人外出旅行;第一次做家务;第一次赢得比赛;第一次……。请根据提示,就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括:
1.第一次……的整个过程;
2.你的感受。
要求:
1.词数:80—100
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time
1.本文为夹叙夹议文,介绍第一次做某事的经历用一般过去时,谈感受时用一般现在时。本文主要使用第一人称。
2.叙述过程完整,避免语法错误,注意时态转换。
十
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外活动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.视力减退有多种原因。有运动量减少,体质下降;有饮食不当,营养不良;有使用电子产品过度对视力造成伤害等。可根据各条提出建议并解释原因。
2.以第一人称为主,一般现在时态为主。
十一
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:
1.严格要求;
2.耐心指导;
3.热情鼓励;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
1.时态以一般过去时为主。
2.人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。
3.主要内容:严格要求;耐心指导;热情鼓励。
十二
假如你是刘华,请根据自身特长写一封不少于80词的英文自荐信,并通过电子邮件发送给活动负责人张勇,要点如下:
1.包含A部分所有信息;
2.你认为志愿者工作有什么意义;
3.信中不得出现考生的真实个人信息。
1.要求写一封自荐信;
2.人称用第一人称;
3.时态以一般现在时为主;
4.要点:(1)开门见山,引出主题;(2)陈述志愿活动的内容及意义;(3)提出希望。
答案全解全析
中考真题精练
一
2020福建中考
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Dear David,
I'm pleased to know that you're interested in Chinese medicine. Now, I'd like to share with you some information about Traditional Chinese Medicine Day in our school, which is going to take place on July 31, 2020.
On that day, a famous doctor will give us a talk on Chinese medicine. And there will be a show about its development. Also, the film Li Shizhen will be on. I'm sure the activities would be very helpful to you. I hope you can visit www. intelschool. com and have a better understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
二
2019福建中考
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Dear Harry,
Congratulations! How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future they’ll play more important roles in our daily life. In fact, I’m dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you’ll make greater progress.
Yours,
Li Hua
三
2018福建中考
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Dear Henry,
I am glad that you are interested in wushu. Here I’ve got good news for you. The first wushu festival of our school is going to be held from July 7 to 9, 2018. I'd like to invite you to the festival. You can watch many wushu competitions and enjoy wonderful shows.
Chinese wushu has a history of thousands of years. Practicing wushu is a good way to improve our health. Besides, it helps us to develop strong wills. Most of us like it very much. I hope you will come and experience Chinese wushu culture.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
四
2017福建中考
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Hi, John, I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.
Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Refreshing Fujian, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers. Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
模拟精练
一
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Good morning, everyone! Today I am glad to introduce a teenager. His name is Chen Xin. He is from Class Two, Grade Nine. He is a boy full of integrity and honesty. Whenever he meets some people around, he is always very friendly and gets on well with them.What’s more, he is an honest boy who never tells a lie at school or at home. As long as he makes a promise, he will never break it. Even when he is in trouble, he always tries his best to overcome it to keep his promise.
One night, while Chen Xin was doing his homework at home, he remembered that it’s time to give back a book to his classmate. However, it was very late and it was raining heavily outside.“I must return it now!” he said to himself. Without thinking twice, he put down his pen quickly and rode his bike to his friend’s home. When he came back home, he was all wet. He did his homework until midnight. Although he was tired, he was very happy!
It’s really important for everyone to be honest(reliable,friendly). Chen Xin has set a good example to us. If everyone can be honest(reliable, friendly), we believe our world will be more wonderful.
二
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My Chinese Learning
With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. As native speakers, it’s our duty to learn Chinese well. It helps us to understand Chinese culture better.
Chinese was one of the subjects when I was in primary school. At first, I used to be weak in it, and felt stressed out. My Chinese teacher advised me to read more books. From then on, reading played an important role in my life. I often went to the library which was near my home. I made much more progress in Chinese.
I think reading books is a useful way of learning Chinese well. Also, it’s necessary to practice writing as often as we can. Only in this way can we become a good Chinese learner.
三
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The Green City, the Healthy Life
As a citizen of Lianyungang,it’s our duty to help build a green city so that we can live a healthy life.We can reduce air pollution by riding bicycles.It’s better for us to put rubbish into the rubbish bin.In this way,we can keep our city clean.And we’d better plant more trees to protect the natural environment.
In my opinion,I’ll try my best to make our city cleaner and more beautiful.Firstly,I can save water by taking shorter showers.Secondly,I can save energy by turning off the lights when I leave the room.In a word,everyone can do something to make a difference.
四
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Hello, everyone!It's a great honor to give a speech here.I’d like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei. He likes playing football and he also likes computer games. To get good grades, he often cheats in the exams. As a result, he gradually falls behind other students. What’s worse, he isn’t trusted by others.
So I think we should be honest in the exams. And it’s important to do homework by ourselves. We ought to tell the truth and be honest students. If we promise to do something, we’d better try our best to keep the promise.
That’s all. Thank you for listening!
五
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I’ll Enjoy Reading in the Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. And I plan to make full use of the time to read some books. I think reading has a lot of benefits. First, reading can let me know more about the world. Besides, I can get a lot of pleasure from reading. Finally, I can gain a lot of knowledge from books.
I need to make a reading plan to make reading more effective. What is the most important is that I should find some good books to read. What’s more, I need to make a schedule to manage my time well. To understand the books better, I want to join a reading club to share with others.
六
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Almost every summer vacation, quite a few students are reported to have accidents. It’s important to know how to keep safe.First, when you go swimming, you should go with your friends or parents. Don’t swim in the river or in the sea. Second, you must keep away from the fire. Third, it’s important for you to obey the traffic rules, or you’ll be in danger. Fourth, you ought to eat healthy food. Last but not least, when you go travelling, you had better not go alone.
In a word, if everyone can realize the importance of safety, we can spend a healthy and safe holiday.
七
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The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.
However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.
In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.
八
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How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What’s more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
九
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As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I won the English competition.
When I was a child, I was not good at English and I hated English class, so that I often lost my thought when I was learning English. However, my warm-hearted English teacher always encouraged me to study harder. Besides, she also taught me some ways of learning English, such as talking with native speakers, writing as often as possible and listening to English songs and so on. From then on, with her help and my efforts, I started to be interested in English and learn English actively in my class.
Finally, I entered the English competition and won the first prize.
When you have trouble in studying subjects or something else, do not give up. I believe you will find the way to solve problems successfully. Only in this way can we achieve our dreams.
That’s all! Thank you!
十
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Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
十一
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I’d like to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Li, because she’s helped me a lot.
Once, I failed my English exam. When she found I was very worried, she encouraged me to study harder and promised to help me. After that, I turned to her for help every time I had questions. She was always patient to make me understand every single question. With her help, I’ve had enough courage to face difficulties and made much progress in English.
Thank you, my dear teacher!The love and support from you will be with me forever.
十二
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Dear Zhang Yong,
I am writing to you in the hope that I may have the opportunity to be a volunteer. I want to help the old people in the old people’s home.
With other volunteers, I can help the old people clean the floor and do chores. I am good at singing so I can sing songs to cheer up the old people. Helping others is a good way to make me feel happy and I can make a lot of new friends while we are volunteering. On the whole, we can benefit a lot by engaging ourselves in the voluntary work.
I hope that you will be kind enough to consider my application favorably.
Yours,
Liu Hua
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